On Friday we were split into groups of six and had to present the progress of our brief to Amber and Simon. I was given some feedback and it was really helpful to get the view of my work from my peers. Here are three points which were mentioned during the crit.
One problem was that i was making my letters look to much like graffiti, they had too much detail. I was told to keep my design a bit more simple, this way it would look neater and professional.
My design consists of two fonts mixed together, i was told to try experiment with other fonts not just helvetica and brushscript std. I believe if i try other fonts i might find that two other fonts fit much better with each other!
I'm on track and i have some good ideas which i can develop and produce into my final design i just need to keep experimenting. The two fonts which i have at the moment work very well together and even without adding elements of graffiti they already have a street-art kind of style.
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